What was Hugo's role in the story?
In the first couple of chapters of Black Swan Green, I thought Hugo was going to be much bigger part of the story, but even though he only shows up briefly, he ends up having a signficant impact on how Jason sees himself and what he thinks he wants to become.
Jason introduces Hugo in a way that makes him seem almost perfect, saying that "Hugo would be a cursed name for most kids but on Hugo it's a halo...Luck loves Hugo," (Mitchell 41). This shows not only how much he admires Hugo, but also hints at his jealousy, since everything seems to come easily to Hugo while Jason is constantly held back by Hangman and his stammer. At first, it feels like Hugo is going to be this model of confidence for Jason, someone he can learn from to become more popular and more sure of himself. Jason notices how easily Hugo speaks in situations where he would normally stay quiet, like when Julia is explaining her career choice and Hugo casually says, “Well said, Julia.” That moment stands out because it shows how naturally Hugo is able to handle situations like this and speak his mind without hesitation. Early on, Jason sees him as someone who has everything figured out, someone who is popular, confident, and completely in control in a way Jason feels like he will never be.
What surprised me the most about Hugo is that he wasn’t just some shallow popular kid. He wasn’t like Wilcox at all. When Jason realizes Hugo likes poetry, he is able to talk about Ted Hughes and war poets like Wilfred Owen and Rupert Brooke, and he even brings up George Orwell and books like 1984 and Animal Farm. He says, “But George Orwell’s the man,” which shows how passionate and confident he is in his opinions, not just trying to sound impressive but actually meaning it. He also tells Jason, “If you don’t read his journalism… you can’t say you know Orwell” (Mitchell 55), which shows how knowledgeable he is. This changes Jason’s idea of what “cool” is. Before, he thought being popular meant being a bully or dominant, but Hugo shows him there is another kind of confidence, where you don’t need to put other people down to seem important. It also makes Hugo feel a bit more out of reach for Jason, because he has this ease not just socially but intellectually too. While it is never confirmed, I think Hugo probably would have understood Jason in the same way Julia does later in the novel, where people start to see past how Jason appears on the surface instead of just judging him for his stammer or awkwardness. I also wonder if Hugo every knew Eliot Bouliverad was Jason. I feel like he would be supportive of Jason's poetry.
Hugo was also the first person to introduce Jason to what it takes to act more like a “popular kid,” like smoking. Jason tries it but fails and ends up throwing up, but even then Hugo handles it in a calm way and doesn’t embarrass him the way someone like Wilcox would. That matters because it shows Hugo’s confidence isn’t about putting people down or making them feel small. Instead, he makes Jason feel safer even in moments where he is clearly failing. He isn’t aggressive or mocking, so Jason still looks up to him even when things go wrong. There is a sense that Hugo is guiding him in a quiet, almost indirect way, even if Jason can’t fully keep up with him or match what he is doing. I do think Hugo wants the best for Jason.
By the end, I realized Hugo’s role isn’t to turn Jason into a better version of himself but to show him what he is not. Hugo represents this ideal version of confidence that Jason thinks he needs, but it doesn’t actually fit him. At first Jason really believes that if he could just be more like Hugo, everything about popularity and confidence would make sense, but the more he sees of him, the more obvious it becomes that Hugo’s kind of ease is something Jason can’t just copy. It also brings out Jason’s jealousy, because Hugo makes everything look effortless in a way that Jason can’t relate to. Jason starts to resent that a bit, especially when he feels like if he didn’t have his stammer, he might already be like Hugo, which makes Hugo feel less like a goal and more like a reminder of what he struggles with.
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I think it's really interesting how, on his surface, Hugo seems like the perfect combination of Jason's two aspirations in life. On the one hand, he embodies the confidence and coolness that Jason aspires too when dealing with his peers. At the same time, he also demonstrates a deep knowledge of art and literature that Jason's Eliot Bolivar self pursues.
ReplyDeleteHey Shriya! I think your analysis of Hugo makes a lot of sense, and I definitely agree with you when you say that Hugo shows him what he is not and that he shouldn't pretend to be Hugo. I think it's especially clear at the end of the chapter, when Jason throws up and proves he doesn't really belong in a place where he pretends to be Hugo. It's very interesting too, because he idolizes him so much at the beginning of the chapter and sort of omits it from the record for the rest of the book. Great job!
ReplyDeleteInitially Hugo reminds me of Julia, and I think Jason worships him for some of these precise reasons: he is witty, articulate, extremely cool in his deployment of language, and he's good at winning arguments while making his interlocutors look foolish. For Jason, who can hardly get a sentence out, this is like a superpower. When Hugo and Julia sort of "team up" at the dinner table--while also indicating they take Jason's side over Alex's--it seems to solidify Hugo's role as another role model/mentor figure, a kind of male Julia. (And I'd say he COULD be a significant and meaningful influence on Jason, by giving him a model where you can be "cool" while also being literate, conversant in poetry, not afraid to admit to knowing who Ted Hughes is.)
ReplyDeleteBut just as Julia is in the process of shifting toward being a real and significant mentor in Jason's life, in this chapter Hugo emerges as something like an anti-mentor or even antihero (for his brief appearance in the book). While Julia generally uses her language in the name of truth and justice (winning an argument against obnoxious elitist Uncle Brian, for example), Hugo is just using it to manipulate Jason. He *pretends* to be a mentor who takes this young lad under his wing, but WE can see pretty quickly that he's just bored in Black Swan Green and he's messing with Jason for his own amusement. Early on, Julia might reflect some related tendencies (not nice to call your little brother "Thing"!), but she is much more sincere in her defense of Jason at the table, and this initiates a trend in the novel where she is more and more clear that she is on his "side." Part of Jason's coming of age entails sorting good/real allies from bad/false allies--in the end, he's able to dismiss Hugo as "smarmy" (while talking to Julia), a word that, significantly, he picks up from Holly Deblin.
Hello Shriya, I like how your blog shows how Hugo ends up having a significant impact on how Jason sees himself and what he thinks he wants to become as someone who is popular, confident, and completely in control when talking to Julia. Hugo shows Jason that being cool does not mean being a bully or dominant to a point of bringing out Jason's jealousy.
ReplyDeleteHi Shriya! I agree that Hugo definitely shows traits that could be really beneficial for Jason. His ability to be open, and honest about "geeky" interests is especially a trait that Jason deserved to see represented. But I also really like how you use this confidence as an explanation on how he is an inverse of Jason, that's particularly fascinating, and I think very true. Also, in my section Mr. Mitcheell at one point mentioned that Hugo was... an immortal demon? so I don't know where that fits in with all of this.
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